Currently Working On
This freakin Drama Scene!!!!!!!!
I just don't want it to suck
Process?
I just want to write everything down. From EXACTLY how the character is speaking and what EXACTLY they are doing while they are speaking. I guess that's the hard part about Drama writing, you have to give up A LOT of control when it comes to your characters.
I don't like that.
Currently Reading
Still reading The Thousandth Floor. I read a good chunk the other day. :)
Sorry I was Zoning
Thursday, May 4, 2017
Tuesday, May 2, 2017
High School Nostalgia (who would have thought)
I wish I still had that corsage from prom
The one tied with the blue satin ribbon
The same ribbon you tied around my heart
Even with you miles away
And no longer there
I still feel you tug on it
Every so often.
R.E Savini
Wednesday, April 26, 2017
Word-Count Wednesday 013
Currently Working on
Nothing at the moment. I am going to be working on Match Day some more and I am also going to start working on the Drama scene. I have a few ideas, I just need to pick a direction.
The Process
I'm nervous about writing the drama scene. My comfort zone definitely lies in short stories, so this is new territory for me. I don't know if my ideas will work or how they will turn out.
Currently Reading
Still reading The Thousandth Floor. Haven't really been able to make too much of a dent in it. With the end of the semester coming up, I am finding myself getting swamped with all of the homework and studying that needs to be done.
Nothing at the moment. I am going to be working on Match Day some more and I am also going to start working on the Drama scene. I have a few ideas, I just need to pick a direction.
The Process
I'm nervous about writing the drama scene. My comfort zone definitely lies in short stories, so this is new territory for me. I don't know if my ideas will work or how they will turn out.
Currently Reading
Still reading The Thousandth Floor. Haven't really been able to make too much of a dent in it. With the end of the semester coming up, I am finding myself getting swamped with all of the homework and studying that needs to be done.
Tuesday, April 25, 2017
A Letter to Myself (10 years later)
Dear Me,
Do people still call you a bitch? Good. Keeps you humble. I hope you are successful in whatever way that means for you. I hope you're not working retail anymore (if you are, then you are most definitely a bitch by now).
I hope you have moved on from that one boy. God I hope you moved on.
Have you written those books yet? If not, I'm disappointed in you. If you have, FINALLY.
I hope you have met someone who makes you happy. I hope he adores you. I hope you adore him too.
And if you end up alone, then you end up alone. Adopt a bunch of cats, you'll survive.
People always leave anyways.
Are you still afraid of things? Stop that. You can't live like that anymore.
I hope you get up earlier than 10am. I'm still having trouble with that. If you still are, then stop it. You're wasting a whole lot of your days, and you only get so many.
Don't be so hard on yourself. A lot of this outside shit doesn't matter, and I hope you have figured that out by now.
Is your hair still short? If not, then I know you want to cut it by now. Just do it bro.
Not much to say except that I hope you are out of the town and moving on. As you know, feeling stuck is an absolutely terrible and hopeless feeling. I hope you are not stuck anymore. I hope you are free.
Kick ass and take names. Life's too short not to.
Mom says Hi.
-Rachel (Yourself) (You know that) (Bye)
Do people still call you a bitch? Good. Keeps you humble. I hope you are successful in whatever way that means for you. I hope you're not working retail anymore (if you are, then you are most definitely a bitch by now).
I hope you have moved on from that one boy. God I hope you moved on.
Have you written those books yet? If not, I'm disappointed in you. If you have, FINALLY.
I hope you have met someone who makes you happy. I hope he adores you. I hope you adore him too.
And if you end up alone, then you end up alone. Adopt a bunch of cats, you'll survive.
People always leave anyways.
Are you still afraid of things? Stop that. You can't live like that anymore.
I hope you get up earlier than 10am. I'm still having trouble with that. If you still are, then stop it. You're wasting a whole lot of your days, and you only get so many.
Don't be so hard on yourself. A lot of this outside shit doesn't matter, and I hope you have figured that out by now.
Is your hair still short? If not, then I know you want to cut it by now. Just do it bro.
Not much to say except that I hope you are out of the town and moving on. As you know, feeling stuck is an absolutely terrible and hopeless feeling. I hope you are not stuck anymore. I hope you are free.
Kick ass and take names. Life's too short not to.
Mom says Hi.
-Rachel (Yourself) (You know that) (Bye)
Monday, April 24, 2017
Match Day
20
days until Match Day
///
“This
thing itches.” Kay scratched her arm where the disc had been administered with
chewed finger nails.
“Don’t!” Dom reached over to smack his sister’s hand away
from the incision. “You’ll make it worse.”
Kay
reeled out of her twin’s reach, tucking her right arm into her side, fingers
still grazing the skin, lighter this time. She flicked her long bangs out of her
eyes as she continued her strides across the darkened park and through the tree
line. Dom’s long legs made it easier for him to keep up with her hurried steps.
Kay
almost didn’t hear her brother’s nervous questions as she batted tree branches
out of their path, crunching on crisp fallen leaves as she went.
“Are
they even here?” Dom’s voice had a slight quiver to it, despite the fact that
they meet their friends here on a regular basis.
Her
eyes grazed over Dom’s tall, skinny frame. Noting the way his brown eyes darted
every which way and the slight tremor that haunted his fingers. Getting their
discs in made them officially eligible for Match Day; a concept that had become
a starling reality for the pair. Kay had put on a brave face for her brother as
the nurse had shoved the needle carrying the deadly device into her arm, but
deep down she was terrified of the fact that it could drop her dead in as soon
as a month.
“Yeah,
they’re here,” Kay said, pointing ahead to the soft glow of the bonfire and
noting the figures gathered around it. “It’s just a quiet night.”
Out
of their entire group, Kay and Dom were the first ones to get their discs for
Match Day. Wanda was the next one up, but she wouldn’t be sixteen for a few
more months. Sage and Mason still had a good eight months or so before their
turn as well. Corey, being the youngest of all of them, had a full year.
Kay
couldn’t help but be jealous of the newly fifteen year old. What she wouldn’t
give for just one more day disc free.
It
was completely silent as the twins came up to the fire pit. Their friends had
looks of worry and fear written across their faces. Even the fire knew not to
crackle too loud. Sage and Mason, who were usually throwing anything and
everything into the fire while giggling wildly, were sitting on the ground, legs
crossed, expressions blank. Kay had never seen the two boys so still in her entire
life.
It
was unsettling.
Wanda
sat on one of their usual logs, her skinny elbow rested on her equally skinny knees,
her head was hung low, her blonde curls falling in a cloud around her face. Her
shoulders shuttered ever so slightly. After already losing both of her parents
to Match day, Wanda had taken the news of the twin’s injections the hardest.
This
was the beginning of the end for them, but Kay pushed that out of her head and
asked the last thing that was on everyone’s minds.
“Where’s
Corey?”
Kay’s
voice seemed to make everyone jump out of whatever trance they had been in.
Sage and Mason scurried from their spots and wrapped their arms around Dom’s
waste. Wanda zipped past the three boys to engulf Kay in a fierce hug. Kay
hugged her back, startled at the group’s sudden reaction.
“Relax
guys!” Kay pried Wanda’s arms from her neck, as Dom tried to do the same with
the boys. Kay was about to say something smart about the fact that the
injections weren’t a death sentence, but one look at Wanda’s face had her
stomach tied in knots.
Her
curly hair was tangled in a nest-like state, like she had tossed and turned all
night. Her eyes were puffy and red; probably from crying. She wore an over sized
sweatshirt that probably belonged to Dom at one point. She was drowning in the
fabric.
Kay
instead put a hand on her friends shoulder; squeezing slightly and giving her a
meaningful look. There’s nothing we can
do. She tried to say silently.
Wanda
nodded back to her, laying Kay’s hand over hers and intertwining their fingers.
She cast a sad look to Dom, who refused to meet her eyes.
The
moment was somber and heavy, everything Kay wanted to avoid. Just as she was
about to choke on black clouds above them, Corey came bursting through the
bushes, throwing tree branches and leaves as he did so.
“Guys!”
Everyone
jumped at his high pitched shriek, at fifteen puberty still hadn’t caught up to
him. His short body folded in half, hands resting on his knees as he tried to
catch his breath. Long frizzy red hair getting caught in his mouth every time
he heaved in. His eyes were screwed shut, face as red as a tomato. Kay was
surprised with how out of breath he was. This kid didn’t weigh one hundred
pounds soaking wet, so when he ran he was light as a feather. She very rarely
saw him huffing and puffing.
“Jesus
Corey!” Wanda snapped. Sage and Mason quickly removed themselves from Dom’s
waist and raced over to Corey. Sage grabbed him by the shoulders, both boys
whispering furiously to him. Corey quickly pushed them away, his breath now
regained, he drew himself up to his full height of five foot nothing and took a
deep breath.
“I
found a way.”
Kay
and Dom both gave him a sideways look.
“A
way to what?” Dom asked cautiously.
Corey
took another deep breath.
“A
way out of Match Day.”
Fear
and anger rose up in Kay’s throat. Anyone who talked of getting out of Match
Day was always found and hauled away. That’s how the twin’s mother went. One
day she was cursing the discs at coffee, the next day she was being dragged out
of the house by two large policemen kicking and screaming. Kay remembers her
mother’s disdain for Match Day very clearly. Population control my ass she would say, It’s another way for them to control us. But Kay knew the truth. It
was population control. The country was out of resources, and had been for some
time. Match Day was a way to fix that and maybe delay the starvation and hunger
that would soon set in. If she had to die so someone’s kid could eat, then that
was that. But one thing was for certain, she was not going to be hauled off
like her mother was. She wasn’t going to put Dom or any of her friends through
that again.
“Say
that any louder and they’ll flay you, Corey.” Kay spat at him.
Corey
balled up his fists and pursed his lips. This was a conversation they had over
and over again, Corey was terrified of getting his disc. He had a million and
one conspiracy theories and plans to get out of Match Day, which he got curtesy
of the Mulholland siblings and their groupies.
“Callie
has a way this time, she-“
“Callie
had a way last time too didn’t she? Last I checked it got a guy killed and almost
got you hauled off.” Kay stomped her
way over to the fire pit, trying to gain some distance between her and the red
head. She could hear Sage murmuring to Corey as they all followed.
“Just
drop it man. She got her disc today.”
Corey
ignored him, continuing after Kay with more anger than ever.
“Don’t
you get it?!” He was yelling at her now. “You are going to die, Kay.” He whipped
his skinny arm around his body, pointing a finger at her brother. “Dom is going
to die. The discs will kill him.”
All
color drained from Dom’s face. His eyes went wide with fear. He stretched out a
trembling hand, which Wanda took eagerly.
“Don’t
drag him into this Corey,” Kay stood up, her five foot six frame towering over
the red head. “You’re beef is with me. Keep it that way.” She bumped his
shoulder as she past him, making her way back to her brother’s side.
“Don’t
listen to him Dominic.” Wanda soothed.
Kay
laid a hand on his shoulder.
“Yeah,
don’t listen to him.”
First Match Day
///
No one died on their first Match Day. This was the mantra
that Kay had been repeating to Dom and herself for the past month. Match day
landed on the day corresponding with the month. It was currently October, which
meant that Match Day landed on the 10th. It was a week day, so
luckily Dom was distracted with school work, but that didn’t mean that anyone
forgot what day it was.
As they walked into school, it was impossible not to
notice the silence. Kay scanned the area, looking for kids with tears in their
eyes or any sign that the match had already been chosen and it wasn’t Dom or
Kay. But there were no tears, no screams of anguish; only silent kids waiting
anxiously for a phone call to the office.
“See Dom,” Wanda said as they walked towards their first
classes, “the matches almost always happen in the morning.”
Dom
did not look comforted by her words. There was only so much school work that
could be done in order to avoid thinking about the possibility of your death,
so Dom had spent most of the night switching off between tossing in bed and
researching for a history project. His hair was tangled beyond belief, usual
silky curls frazzled into a mess on his head. His eyes were bloodshot and puffy
from a combination of crying and sleep deprivation.
Having spent the better half of the night bringing her
brother down from anxiety attacks, Kay was sure she didn’t look much better.
Her long hair was frizzy beyond belief when she had looked in the mirror this
morning, chucking it up in a bun was probably no help, but she did it anyways.
Her skin had paled some throughout the night, maybe from the constant feeling
of nausea in the pit of her stomach. She could barely keep her eyes open as Dom
talked her ear off about his project, and when he finally fell asleep, she was too
occupied with the possibility of him dropping dead the next day to get some
sleep herself.
Even
in her sleep deprived state, she knew she just needed to keep her brother calm
for as long as possible.
“It
was probably some old man that dropped at the crack of dawn.” She said, earning
a grimace from Wanda.
Dom
shrugged his shoulders, looking like he really wasn’t hearing what either one
of them were saying to him.
They
kept walking down the hall, their old shoes squeaking on the linoleum floors,
and into their first class of the day. They took their usual seats; Dom in the
third row, Kay right behind, and Wanda one row over.
As
students filed in, each one of their looks lingered on the twins. They were of the
first to get the discs in the class, so they were all curious. At least that’s
what Wanda had said to keep Kay calm, but right now it wasn’t working.
“Nothing
to see chumps.” Kay spat at the new wave of classmates that walked in. They
quickly averted their gazes to the floor and settled in their seats. No need
for them to suffer under the eyes of judgmental teenagers. She reached forward,
placing a hand on her brothers’ shoulder, giving him an encouraging squeeze. He
turned his head, eyes finding hers beneath his shaggy hair, letting her know
that he heard her loud and clear.
Their
teacher came in and they started their lesson for the day. She started by telling
everyone the proper Match Day procedure if she or any of their teachers,
faculty, or classmates were to be “lucky matches”, and then continued to tell
everyone to put it out of their minds for now and focus on their work.
Kay
kept her head down for the first thirty minutes. Math being one of her favorite
subjects, she found it easy to lose herself in the numbers. She constantly
caught Wanda turning her head over to Dom out of the corner of her eye,
checking him over to make sure he was okay. Kay knew he was fine, but she snuck
a few looks his way anyways. She didn’t notice anything but the slight tremor
in his hands, but unfortunately, that was normal.
A
little later into class and Kay knew there was something wrong. Call it ESP or
a freaky twin thing, something was not right. Kay looked up and reached out to
tap Dom’s shoulder with her pencil. Even the slightest touch made him jump
slightly. He refused to turn her way. Kay noticed a slight tremble in his
shoulders, and immediately was concerned.
She
hopped out of her seat, kneeling down next to Dom, and saw what she never hoped
to see.
He
was sweating buckets. Small droplets falling from his nose and onto his
schoolwork below. His hair was stuck to his face, obscuring his vision. His
skin was paler than she had ever seen it before, making him look ghostly. His
entire body was beginning to tremble. Kay placed her hand on his arm, panicking
at how hot he felt.
She
pivoted around to look at Wanda beside her. She looked exactly how Kay felt.
Eyes wide with fear, eyebrows disappearing into her hairline, mouth stuck rounded
in a small “o”. Kay stuck her arm out to smack her friend, silently telling her
to get it together and help her. She wrapped her arms around her brother,
guiding him up and out of his seat. Then she passed him over to Wanda, who had
now gained the sense to stand up and help out. Each girl had one of his long
arms draped over their shoulders and their own wrapped around his waist,
quickly making their way out of the classroom and into the hallway. They
carefully placed his long body on the floor, propping him up against the wall.
“He’s matched! He’s matched!” Wanda was frantic. Pulling
at her hair and digging her fingernails into her skin.
“No way.” Kay said to her. “There’s no way! It’s our
first day! They never match on their first day!” She was shouting now, and
painfully aware of the fact that she was letting her brother see her freak out.
“You don’t get it Kay.” Wanda grabbed her shoulders,
holding them tight. “This is how it happens. One minute you’re fine, the next
you’re on the floor.”
Kay’s eyes went wide.
Her heart dropping into her stomach.
This was actually happening.
She dove to her brother, laying him down, cradling his
head in her lap. She smoothed his hair off his face, running her fingers
through his curls. She could only stare down at him in shock and wait for it to
be over.
The sound of crying caught her ears. Her head snapped up,
extremely confused as to who else would be crying. The twins didn’t really have
many friends, and there was only one of them present to be upset at Dom getting
matched. She peered past Wanda and down the hall. There was a group of people,
part of the Mulholland group by the look of them, crowded in the hallway. Kay
couldn’t pin point exactly who was there, but she wasn’t really worried about
that. Her eyes were glued to the bottoms of two more pairs of shoes. Both laid
out just like Dom was.
Wanda let out a cry, tearing Kay away from the scene down
the hall and back to her brother in her arms. She was now frantically running
her hands through his hair as Wanda clutched his hand in her own. His eye
cracked open a fraction of an inch. He gasped for air, coughing up blood as he
did so. Kay tried to soothe him as best a she knew how. No matter how hard she
tried, she couldn’t stop the tears from pooling in her eyes.
“I love you.” She whispered it softly, wiping sweat from
his brow with the sleeve of her jacket. Wanda was whimpering next to her. She
couldn’t spare a look at her friend.
“I love you too.” His voice was softer than she had ever
heard before. Dry and crackled from the lack of air. He squeezed his eyes
tight, grimacing in some type of pain that Kay would give and arm and a leg to
remove from his body. He opened his mouth and said it again and again until he
gave one last shutter and the breath left his body.
Kay went rigid.
Her
worst nightmare has come true.
Her
best friend
Her
brother
Her
entire world
Was
now dead in her arms.
Her
chest grew tight. She couldn’t breathe as hot tears streaked down her face and
into his hair. She was only slightly aware of Wanda crying beside her. She
wanted so badly to reach up and close his eyes for good, but she couldn’t bring
herself to let go of him for one second. So instead she lowered her head to his
until their foreheads were touching; just as she had done the night before to
calm him.
She
let out a low moan, allowing the sorrow to fill up her lungs and escape past her
lips, and tried her best not to acknowledge that it was the last time she would
hold him close.
Her
best wasn’t good enough.
Word-Count Wednesday 012
Currently Working On
Currently working on the narrative project for class. I just finished it yesterday and I am happy with how it turned out. I definitely want to continue this story.
The Process
The process was good, it was just hard to find time to write.
Also, I had a part in the story where a character died and I found it a little difficult to write. I wanted it to be a good death scene, but I haven't really written people dying before. I didn't want it to be super cliche and I hope it didn't turn out that way. When I do revisions I am going to do some research on how to write a death scene well and maybe tweak that part a little bit.
Currently Reading
Still reading The Thousandth Floor by Katherine McGee. I haven't made much progress on it, but I'm still reading it!
Currently working on the narrative project for class. I just finished it yesterday and I am happy with how it turned out. I definitely want to continue this story.
The Process
The process was good, it was just hard to find time to write.
Also, I had a part in the story where a character died and I found it a little difficult to write. I wanted it to be a good death scene, but I haven't really written people dying before. I didn't want it to be super cliche and I hope it didn't turn out that way. When I do revisions I am going to do some research on how to write a death scene well and maybe tweak that part a little bit.
Currently Reading
Still reading The Thousandth Floor by Katherine McGee. I haven't made much progress on it, but I'm still reading it!
Thursday, April 13, 2017
Word-Count Wednesday 011
What am I working on?
I have been working on the narrative piece for class. The due date is coming up quick! I haven't made too much progress, but I've started it so that counts for something.
How do I feel about the process?
School and work have been getting in the way (lame excuse I know). Everything is just a little overwhelming and I'm trying not to die.
Currently Reading?
I am currently reading another YA novel called The Thousandth Floor.
Over the weekend (last week) I read TWO books! WOOOOOO!!!!!
Review up on my blog ;)
www.savvireads.wordpress.com
I have been working on the narrative piece for class. The due date is coming up quick! I haven't made too much progress, but I've started it so that counts for something.
How do I feel about the process?
School and work have been getting in the way (lame excuse I know). Everything is just a little overwhelming and I'm trying not to die.
Currently Reading?
I am currently reading another YA novel called The Thousandth Floor.
Over the weekend (last week) I read TWO books! WOOOOOO!!!!!
Review up on my blog ;)
www.savvireads.wordpress.com
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